Class 5 Assign. 1: Revising my Report on Wearable Devices

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Twg9wMdRIFPgtekRg6QUCK3VGiEytcnZU_Kl3ETUQg4/edit?usp=sharing

WEARABLE DEVICE REPORT

1. Re-formatting the original report according to the requirements in the lecture notes.

2. Deleting the contents on Apple Watch, because new and official information has been released by Apple

3. Adding a paragraph on Apple Watch's functionality and raising questions imposed on the product 

4. Researching and reporting on the arguments that oppose to the usefulness of the Apple Watch

5. Introducing innovative functions of the Apple Watch, and stating its significance (addition to the original report)

6. On the Samsung Gear Fit paragraph, I've added recently released information on the Samsung Pay, which is a counterpart to Apple's Apple Pay

7. Writing a new conclusion based on the newly inputted information on the entire report

8. Adding another conclusive paragraph to better project the future of the industry, and the industry's required action to promote the growth of the industry/ Also proof reading and checking for errors.

This is an assignment from the Immersive Education course that I am taking at Boston College. The course is called Collaborative Computing. For details, visit the immersive BC portal at http://ImmersiveEducation.org/@/bc